Max Feuerman 12-1-14
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ELA Social Awareness Project
Overview- The social issues in our society
today are numerous. The stresses of school for one, every day can be a battle
just to learn. Democracy is also a strong topic. At this very moment, many
people in Hong Kong are fighting for their democratic rights that China agreed
to give them, and that people still hold on to the old ways of totalitarianism.
Probably the most heated topic in the U.S. is racism. There is still income,
justice, and working conditions inequality. For example, African Americans are
3 times more likely to be searched, cuffed, and arrested than whites. There are
many issues still out today, and these only a few of the brightest.
Table of Contents
The problems of school- Page 1
A poem on Democracy- Page 2
The Topic of Racism- Page 3
The Daily Stress of School
You
finish with school just to come home, and do more schoolwork. What’s the point
of having school end at 3:00 if you are still spending an hour to do homework? The
purpose of homework is practicing what you learned it school, which is not bad
necessarily, only when used in the wrong way it does not help your child’s
education. Homework can also cause stress in kids, especially if they have a
busy day and are worried about their grade, and received a lot of homework.
Homework can also take away time you need to get a proper sleep, which is
detrimental to the child’s ability to learn. Also, homework takes up time that
kids would rather use for after school activities, getting enough exercise, or
just hanging out with a friend. Homework may be contributing to the obesity
epidemic because kids are not exercising enough.
Should
homework be banned? Some parents think so. In Australia, one mom Sharny Kieser
is challenging that homework should be banned, because it is preventing kids
from exercising and contributing to obesity. The DOE and schools however, want
homework as a method of practicing what you learned in class. Both of these
arguments have pros and cons, and here are some solutions to meet partway. One
possible solution to the stress of homework is is having teachers collaborate
with each other about homework, so you don’t have every subject in the same day
giving homework. Another way is what MS 51 was doing, having what’s called “0”
period every day except Friday, where you could come in and get help on
homework or a project before classes start, having this bit of breathing room
can help take stress off of kids. These are two hopefully possible solutions to
homework stress, and there are probably many more.
A poem on Democracy
They say democracy is key
To having a world happy and free
But
some have other plans
Those tight fisted rulers of the land
Are taking control
Of the
world the world they once loathed
And are killing civilians as they please
They put many risk
For their own little gain
And are still making many miserable today
I came up
with this little poem based are on the article about the Hong Kong protestors
and how China’s government is taking control of Hong Kong’s democratic
government. China has kept their very strict totalitarian rule over the
population of over 1 billion Chinese. They deny “basic freedoms” like freedom
of speech, or freedom of religion. They will not let up, they believe that they
have a right to everything, and are a very hot “melting pot”, or assimilator.
Racism
Even
after a lot of society’s’ efforts to get rid of racism, it is still prominent
today. The arch on Grand Army Plaza is proof, even after centuries; the world
still has not gotten over the fact of racism. On the right side of the arch
opposite Prospect Park is the Union side of the war, and in the statue, an
African American (kneeling next to the bottom next to the cannon), is one of
Income inequalities
are still prominent, with the average U.S. citizen making around $50,000 a
year, while African Americans make around $33,000 a year on average. The percentage
of African Americans making under $15,000 dollars a year is 25%, while 27% make
15-35,000 dollars a year, this is all well below the poverty threshold. The
unemployment rate is also significant, with around 11% of African Americans
unemployed, while the U.S. rate is about 6%. African Americans are more likely
to be in poverty than all other races. In families, about 24% of African
Americans are in poverty while the global average poverty rate is about 12%.
Use of force
by police is unfairly targeted at African Americans. They are 3 times more
likely to be searched, handcuffed, and arrested. The police use deadly force
more frequently to African Americans than whites, as shown in news reports. For
example, 2 cases, one in Ferguson and one in Staten Island show the trend. In
Ferguson, an African American who shoplifted cigarettes was shot 6 times and
killed by an officer. The police officer nearest was told by his dispatcher
that an African American teenager had robbed a store. On Staten Island, an African American was
killed with an illegal chokehold, after selling untaxed cigarettes. The man
said he couldn’t breathe many times, before he suffocated. The witnesses also
heard him, but they didn’t let up on him until he was dead The fire of racism
still burns strong today, and will for a long time to come.

Bibliography
<http://blackdemographics.com
http://www.news.com.au
www.nytimes.com
I think the concept of your reading response is very interesting. It seems crazy that there is still so much racism going on in America. You used really strong evidence to support your thesis. Good work!!
ReplyDeleteI think that the way you wrote the poem, straight to the point yet clear, really showed the emotion of something that you care about. You speak to the reader and the people that you speak of no matter whether they're listening. And the way you speak through your writing draws the eye and all the attention of the reader.
ReplyDelete"The Daily Stress of School" is a very interesting topic for a social issue. It is unique, not many people write about that which makes your response powerful. The topic of homework is always being debated on whether there should be homework or not and you made it clear in your response that homework may be beneficial to a child's education, but really it may not. You back your thesis with strong evidence, good response.
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